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http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2013/04/09/nicholas-douglas-stolen-iphone_n_3047404.html?utm_hp_ref=technology
Use
the process we have been using to critique classroom work to critique
Facebook. Identify one positive use, one negative use, and one
suggestion to improve Facebook. Make sure that you use complete
sentences and capital letters and punctuation in the correct places.
When
you complete your warmup open your Pirate Prep project, get four pieces
of scratch paper from the front of the room, and a writing utensil. We
will begin critique 20 minutes after the beginning of class. We will be using a new critique process. Miss. Holmberg will explain the process to you after you have completed your warmup.
Nathaniel S.
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Positive:One positive is that you can connect with family in other states.
Negative:Kids or adults can cyber bully someone else.
Donelle s.
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positive: I think that Facebook is a good thing to be on because you could talk to family and friends and play games and stuff like that.
Negative: The thing i don't like about Facebook that businesses can hack your Facebook and sometimes people do cyber bulling.
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The positive: You can Talk to your friends and family from far away.
The negative: You can find some people's phone numbers and call them , text them, and/or track them down.
Suggestion: You should not allow facebook to put peoples phone numbers on there.
Dallas M.
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positive:it it is just fine
negative: no more nasty photos
suggestion:tell the persons name
Idaly.P
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Positive:A good use of Facebook is that you can connect with other people through the internet.
Negative: That people can post rude comments and people you may not even know add you.
zach.f
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positive: I think that Facebook is a good thing to be on because you could talk to family and friends and play games and stuff like that.
Negative: The thing i don't like about Facebook that businesses can hack your Facebook and sometimes people do cyber bulling.
destiny m.
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positive you can talk to your family
negative ceberbully goes alot on facebook
Destiny T.
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Positive: maybe probably a life lock thing
Negative:none
suggestion:Facebook needs to be more private and not so open.
Andrea P.
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The positive thing about facebook is can communicate with other people.
The negative thing about faceook you can be cyber-bulling.
A suggestion is that they shouldn't put adds.
Jessica G.
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Positive: I think that is smart.
Negative: It could have been kind of dangerous.
Suggestion: I think he should have probably seen if it was his iPhone. He should have asked the thief to send a picture of the iPhone, jut to make sure.
Mechelle .M.
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One positive thing i have to say about Facebook is you can talk to your Friends on it.
One negative is you can post random stuff on to it.
One suggestion is to not let people get on to your account.
Yazmin S.
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Positive:I think that it helps get back together with family.
Negative:Is that it is dangerous sometimes like if you don't have it blocked.
Suggestion:Be more careful.
Kaiten kauffman
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I think that this is hard for me but yea ok but thank you.
Tristen L.
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Positive:when the officer helped him
Negative:a kid that steals phones
Kayla B.
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positive:its just fine
negative:no more discusting photos.