For your warmup today, you will be practicing providing specific feedback. Follow the link and read the attached article.
Detecting Concussions
Review the invention and determine one positive comment, one negative comment, and a suggestion for the inventors. Use complete sentences and make sure that your feedback is very specific.
When you have completed your warmup, pull up your project. During
critique, I will speak to each of you individually and complete a
progress check. Next, get a post-it from me and wait for instruction.
Nathaniel S.
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I like how they are testing it.The article isn't that interesting.They should be specific on which sport.
Dallas M.
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positive:it detects brain dizzies
negative:i bet it cost a lot of money
suggestion:save up your money for an a ipad
zach.f
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Positive: I think that will be very useful and help a lot of people.
Negative: That could also mess up because some people just have a speech problem and that would say they had a concussion.
Suggestion: i think that they should add a camera to check the athletes eyes
destiny m.
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thats cool he talk about concussions
and that they should be tend
kaiten K.
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I think that it is a good store and i think that it needs more good words but its ok but i dont like it that much.
Destiny T.
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I think it is really cool cause the hexopod can carry a person. But it looks weird like a creepy spider.Maybe he should have a different appearance so i doesnt freak out when they see it.
Cassidy f.
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Positive: I think it is interesting that they can figure out if a man or woman has a concussion just by doing a test with an ipad.
Negative: I think that you never know if it could mess up and say you don't when you do and that will lead to serious problems.
Suggestion: I think they should test this with alot of people before it goes viral.
Jessica G.
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I think this is good idea because they could know when someone is having a concussion. I think this invention is also kind of bad because it could also get into they're privacy, but it's still a good idea. I would suggest to do that in other schools too.
Mechelle .M.
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I think that this post is realy good.I like the fact that it not only about one thing.
Yazmin S.
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One negative comment is that maybe the person that eats it can be allergic to the things that are in it.One positive is that it can tell you if they have a concussion or not.I don't have a suggestion.
Idaly.P
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Positive: I think that idea is very smart.
Negative:That it can cause thing such as hyper nasality,disorted vowels and , impercise constants.
Suggestion : The inventor should try to improve it.
by trying to get rid of the things these can cause .
DeleteAndrea P.
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Positive: I think that its really cool that how they can check on an ipad if someone got a concussion.
Negative :I don't have nothing negative
Suggestion: They should try it out on more people.
Christopher L. 4th hour In the article it talks about concussions and how they are treated at the hospital. Concussions should be treated right away because if there not then there can be serious problems later.
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that was a good
idia