For your warmup today, you will be practicing providing specific feedback. Follow the link and read the attached article.
Detecting Concussions
Review the invention and determine one positive comment, one negative comment, and a suggestion for the inventors. Use complete sentences and make sure that your feedback is very specific.
When you have completed your warmup, pull up your project. During
critique, I will speak to each of you individually and complete a
progress check. Next, get a post-it from me and wait for instruction.
Gage Missey
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positive:it seems like a important invention.
negative:not everybody has an apple product to use it.
Emily B.
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A negative thing would be that the mantis weighs 2000 pounds. A positive thing would be that all of the ideas are really creative. A suggestion would be not to make some of the inventions so dangerous.
Eric q
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positive:i think that this thing is very cool
negative:i do not like it because sometimes that ipad is wrong because it is a machine
suggestion:i think that you or the people like doctors should just make the people go for a regular chech up every 6 months.
Chris B.
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I think it is a great idea to have a cuncusion detecter thing in an ipad.
Yeribel L.S.
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Think this idea is cool, but I don't know if it actually works. This could be fake. I think the should do some more tests.
Alexa W.
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Positive: I think that will be very useful and help a lot of people.
Negative: That could also mess up because some people just have a speech problem and that would say they had a concussion.
Suggestion: i think that they should add a camera to check the athletes eyes.
Mileena C.
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Positive: I think this is a good invention.
Negative: It could possibly detect wrong and give wrong information.
Suggestion: I think this would be a good invention if it was 100% correct.
Douglas R.
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my feedback is very specific to me to use.
Ambrey S.
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The positive thing about the invention is that you could tell whether they have a concussion.
The negative is that someone might have a speech problem so they might say they have a concussion.
The suggestion I have is they need to find a more specific way to detect the concussion.
Wade P
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I think this is a good thing to do.
The system could mis-function.
make it available to all people.
Braxton M
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I think it is a good idea because you would know of a concussion earlier. It could detect the words wrong and it said a concussion when you really dont. They should a different way to detect a concussion.
Dylan R.
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treys are so cool they look awesome I wood like to make something like that
Balize S.
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positive:Its a good idea
negative:I can be bad though
suggestion:I would change what its about
Mikayla A.
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Positive: i think will be good invention
Negative: It is possibly give wrong information
Matison B.
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I think it is a smart app that would help you find out if you have a concussion.I think that it would be kind of challeging to have your ipad everywhere.I think it would be smarter to make it to where it can be on any device.
Lacey M.
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Positive: I think it is a good idea.
Negative: It ways 2000 pounds.
Suggestion: I think it ways to much.
Tea E
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Positive- It could help prevent injury before it gets too bad just by something as simple as talking
Negative- The person who is speaking before could already have speech problems.
Suggestion- Maybe you could have a setting for people with speech problems to switch to so if someone has a hard time talking right, you wouldn't instantly think they have a concussion.
sydney r
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positive: it could help
negative: people that have speech problem
suggestion:that they should try some thing new
Cephia P
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Positive: I think that this is a great idea.
Negative:This may not be the best idea out there.
Suggestion:Maybe try getting more details.
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Francisco p
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positive: it seems very interesting and cool
negative: the system might not help everyone
suggestion: i would prefure a different sight
jordyn g
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positive i think this app will be very useful instead of rushing someone to the hospital.
negative this app could mis-function
suggestion find another way to detect concussions.
Kiara Whistler
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I think it is a very good idea. Positive I think it is cool. Negative is that I think it will be wrong about yourself. Suggestion that is very cool but there could be a different way to know if you have a cuncution.
Raymond L
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postie i think it is a good idea because it could help many people.
negative is that they should not be using the i pad for these reasons.
colette c
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positive it is very good
negative it is not exelent
suggestion write better
Jezaka M.
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positive:I think this is a good idea.
negative:Would if it is wrong.
suggestion:it would be good though
Reegan H.
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Positive:it is useful
negative: people voices when they talk could be hard to understand so then the machine could say something else
suggestion:they need to be more specific
Cheyenne J
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Positive:I think it is a good thing to do.
Negative:It could be wrong and it could be wrong and tell you that you have a concussion when you don't.
Suggestion:Don't try it.
Joliana S.
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Positive:It might help
Negative:some people have speaking problems
Suggestion:some people need to try something new
Jaden C.
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Positive: Great detail about the mantis.
Negative: I dont think there's a negative thing about the mantis.
Suggestion:No
Sergio C.
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positive:I think it seems very intersting and cool.
Negitive:I didn't get any posted notes on my project.
Suggestion:Mabey i should probley choosse another preject,
Jonah M.
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positive: I think that it will be easier to detect concussions.
negative: Not everybody would have access to use it.
suggestion:You should make it more accessible.