For your warmup today, you will be practicing providing specific feedback. Follow the link and read the attached article.
Detecting Concussions
Review the invention and determine one positive comment, one negative comment, and a suggestion for the inventors. Use complete sentences and make sure that your feedback is very specific.
When you have completed your warmup, pull up your project. During
critique, I will speak to each of you individually and complete a
progress check. Next, get a post-it from me and wait for instruction.
Citlalic M.
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Positive: I like how they are testing it.
Negative: The article isn't that interesting.
Suggestion: They should be specific on which sport.
Regina C.
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i like how know how to test it and how cool they did it.
what i didnt like was how it was kind of boring reading it.
Ethan D.
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Positive:Good for thinking about people.
Negative:What if your ipad is off.
Suggestion:Make it to were even the ipod is off, it can still detect it.
Brenden R.
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Positive: It is a really good idea, and can detect a concussion quickly and prevent long term damage.
Negative: Electronics can tend to mess up and if it does it could give someone the wrong information.
Suggestion: Make the devise easy to use for people.
Myranda S.
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Positive: Have a good idea to make sure people are safer
Negative: It only works on tablets
Suggestion: Try to put on cell phones as well as the tablets
Kevin B
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+:I like the Idea that it is easier to find a cuncossion rite then and there.
-:I think that it is just an easier way than going to the hospital.
s:I suggest that they should make it to where they can find all sorts of diseases.
Pete,M
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positive: I like how it works and how they use it to detect concussion.
negative: I wouldn't like to have a electronic thing tell if i have a concussion because electronics tend to mess up.
Suggestion:make the hardware more easy to understand and more hardy.
Henry C.
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Positive: That is a good way to test it.
Negative: I really did not like how they used a I-pad.
Suggestion: They should be very specific on which sports.
Justin K
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Positive: this is a very good idea and it will help athletes determine if they are injured or not.
Negative: This new invention could probably be fooled or mouth function causing the athletes to continue playing with brain damage.
Suggestion: Do more testing and make sure you work out the bugs before mas producing this new invention.
David u.
ReplyDelete7th hour
Positive: that thats i good way to test that
Negative:It can be dangerous
Suggestion: to keep on making different test
Isaiah A.
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positive: They made a good invention
negative: The article was not good a enough to prove a enough to be a good invention
Suggestion: Really good invention
Alyssa O.
ReplyDelete7hr
Positive i think its a really good idea.
Negative Some can get the wrong information
suggestion make stuff useful
Mckayla k.
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A positive comment it is a very good testing method!!!!
A negative comment is the article is not very engaging!!
A suggestion need more details!!!
Jesse C.
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negative:the article is boring
positive:i like how they are helping people.
suggestion:they should use it for other things that give you a concussion.
Isabel L.
ReplyDelete7th hour
Positive:Its a really good idea
Negative:It only works on tablets
Suggestion:Should make it for phones and IPods
Andrea L.
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Positive Comment-I think this is a very good testing.
Negative Comment-Its not very exciting article.
Suggestion-Make more interesting
Alexia E.
ReplyDelete7th hour
Positive~ Its a really cool idea.
Negative~ Its hard to understand.
Suggestion~ Make the stuff worth using.
Anita B.
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Positive:good idea for sports
Negative:i really don't get why anyone would need that
Suggestion:make sheer that it works 100% the right why