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Use
the process we have been using to critique classroom work to critique
Facebook. Identify one positive use, one negative use, and one
suggestion to improve Facebook. Make sure that you use complete
sentences and capital letters and punctuation in the correct places.
When
you complete your warmup open your Pirate Prep project, get four pieces
of scratch paper from the front of the room, and a writing utensil. We
will begin critique 20 minutes after the beginning of class. We will be using a new critique process. Miss. Holmberg will explain the process to you after you have completed your warmup.
Esai M.
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It is easier to talk to more people at once.
It is not good because their is a lot of weirdos out there.
make a password so weirdos cant talk to you.
Nicholas B.
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Good:You can text alot of people while playing games.
Bad:there are alot of stalkers.
idea:Put less information on facebook so u dont get stalked.
Mayra Arreola
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Positive: Facebook is useful in many ways.
Negative: You can get a lot of information.
Suggestion: They should not put a lot of information.
Citlalic M.
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Positive: Facebook helps you find your phone.
Negative: Facebook has to many ads and nasty stuff
Suggestion: take off all the ads and nasty stuff
Trey B.
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Positive: You can talk to anyone in the world.
Negative: Anyone can read about you and be a creep.
Suggestion: Make better security thingumabobs.
Brayden D.
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+ I think it would be great to talk to family and friends that you hardly get to see.
- People you don't know could look at all your stuff.
Suggestion- I think there should be a lock were everyone could look at your page and one for your friends to look at your page.
Jamine V.
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positive:you shoulf talk to other people.
negitive:you should put it in a save place.
seggeation:never live things in a locker
Second Hour
ReplyDeletePositive: Facebook helps old and new friends connect in new ways.
Negative: It allows creeps and/or pedophiles easier access to meet younger people, by lying about their identity or age.
Suggestion: Mark Zuckerberg, stop trying to pry people on Facebook of money just because you're losing you fortune piece b piece
Alison B.
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A positive use is that Facebook could track down a phone.A negative is that other people can see what you are trying to do and take the phone first.A suggestion is that to use something different other than Facebook.
Adilene C.
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positive:you should talk to other people.
negitive:you should put it in a save place.
seggestion:put thinks in a save place.
James M.
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Positive: Facebook has good games.
Negative: Facebook may allow bad messages.
Suggestion: Facebook can get more games.
Nicolle B.
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One positive think about Facebook is that you could talk to your friends.One negative thing is that you could see bad stuff on it.One suggestion is that they do not put things that are bad for young kids.
Adriana Aragon
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positive:Facebook is useful in a lot of ways.
negative:there is weirdos that have a Facebook and look at your profile.
suggestion:do not become friends with people you don't know.
Mario A
ReplyDeletepositive you can stay in touch with family
negative people hack your profile and act like they are you
suggestion dont personal information on your facebook
Eduardo M.
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positivo:Tiene que hablar con mas personas.
negativo:Tiene que ponerlo en un lugar seguro.
suggestion:Tiene que poner sus cosas en un lugar seguro.
Tony G
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sug-dont spend all your time on the computer.
pos-you can talk to friends all the time.
neg-you will spend every day on the computer.
Ty c
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positive:has fun games.
negative:people can trace were live and come and steal stuff.
Taylor P.
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positive: Well i think its pretty cool you could find your phone..But next time you should lock the locker.
Gage G.
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One positive thing about Facebook is that you can talk to your family from far away.
One negative thing about Facebook is that is sucks its addictve and it has no purpose!!.
Suggestion Be productive with our lives and find a cure for cancer.
Diana G.
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positive: i like how it looks real.
negative: you can put more info on it.
suggestion:put more info on the toy poodle.
Emiley H.
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A positive use is being able to communicate with family in another country. A negative use for Facebook being rude to people over the web.
A suggestion for Facebook is make it safer.
Jolee S.
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positive: i think that Facebook is really help for in ways
negative: people could find out alot of stuff about u and kidnap you
suggestion:take of ads
Lalo.D
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positive:facebook can be useful.
negative:you can see peoples information
suggestion:i dont have one
Buddie N
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p=i think facebook is helpful in alot of ways.
N=there is weirdos that stock you .
s= i will never become friends with someone i do not know
Sammya .L
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A positive about facebook is that it can let you have a lot of friend's. A negative is there is a lot of bulling, drama. a suggestion is to ignore all of that stuff.
Cole L
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A positive thing about Facebook is that it can help you find out things in the world
A negative thing about Facebook is that people can hack your account