For your warmup today, you will be practicing providing specific feedback. Follow the link and read the attached article.
Detecting Concussions
Review the invention and determine one positive comment, one negative comment, and a suggestion for the inventors. Use complete sentences and make sure that your feedback is very specific.
When you have completed your warmup, pull up your project. During
critique, I will speak to each of you individually and complete a
progress check. Next, get a post-it from me and wait for instruction.
James M.
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S= You could look in the persons eyes.
N= You could look in the persons eyes.
P= It is pretty cool.
Mayra A.
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Positive: I think it is cool how you can examine yourself with a tablet.
Negative: I think you should go to a hospital for they could tell you what is wrong.
Suggestion: I think they should put a doctor speaking on that program.
Gage G.
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positive:i like how they can give a test that is accurately right. and it doesn't cost a lot of money.
Negative comment: what will happen if the tests fail. how would you know from there if you do or do not have a concussion.
Gage G.
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Suggestion: Instead of using this why not just have regular doctors check you out.
Ricky A.
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I think that this is a good idea because it is a easy way to tell if a player has a concussion. The thing i don`t like is you have to have a tablet to use it. My suggestion would be make it for other devices to.
Ty C.
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p= It is cool because it can detect if u have a injury it will tell u.
n= i think it wont help u with any thing
Alison B.
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A positive comment is that you can take the tablet during sports.A negative comment is that you have a tablet that you have to take everywhere.A suggestion is that they should make something that you don't have to take anything with you.
Brayden D.
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Positive: I think the invention is really cool. This could help a lot.
Negative: I think sometimes maybe the scanner could mess up which would not help at all.
Suggestion: You should test on more tablets or i pads to make sure it actually works.
Taylor P.
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i think the invention is really cool and great for people who have a concussion.
One thing about it is you have to hold it and carry it every place you go.
Mateo F.
ReplyDeleteP: It is helpful and gives you the information you need.
N: It doesn't show many things about symptoms of a concussion.
S: Add helpful tips of what to do when some has a concussion
Nicolle B.
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One positive comment is that I think it cool invention.One negative comment is that I did not think it was very interesting article to read about.One suggestion that I have for the inventors is that you try to make it more interesting article about it.
Nicholas B.
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I think that the brain tummer thing would help alot. But people should go see a doctor because they might be alot better. The inventors should make a brain tummer thing off of technology.
Samuel G.
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Positive: I love it!
Negative: the subject just might be tired.
Suggestion: put in settings so that the subject may select Male or Female.
Tony G
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s:i think they should make the test be on all devices.
N:they should go to the hospital
P:i think it will held so nobody gets hurt.
Joshua B.
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Positive: It is a smart idea.
Negative: What if the test fails?
Suggestion: They should run more tests to be positively sure that it works.
Adilene C.
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Positive: it is interesting
negative:I think that they should check what u have
suggestion : you should try to get ipad that works for you and you could use.
Esai M.
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P=I think that it is cool because you can determine if you have a concussion from an ipad.
N= It might not work if the ipad doesnt work.
test multiple times
Diana G.
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positive:i like how they are testing it
they should put more . interesting information.negative:you need to put more sport stuff.
Lilly l.
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a positive comment is you can take the tablet any were .
negative you have to take the tablet with you.
Buddie N
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p=i think that is cool because you can tell if u have a concussion from a ipad
N=it wont work if the ipad does not work
Jolee S.
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P: u did a good job
N: if the test fails how do u know if u do or dont have a concussion
S: there should be a doctor
Eduardo M.
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Positivo:Que es interesante.
Negativo:Que es muy feo.
suggestion:Que nesesita ayuda.
Tony H.
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Positive I think that it is a good idea.
Suggestion I think that they should put facts about how to get rid of a concussion.
Negative You don't know how accurate the system is.
Adriana A.
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some thing positive is you can take the tablet where ever you want with you.
some thing negative is that you you have to take it with you
Trey B.
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p=that is cool
n=hospitals are better
s=make it call the hospital if it does say you have a concussion.