For your warmup today, you will be practicing providing specific feedback. Follow the link and read the attached article.
Detecting Concussions
Review the invention and determine one positive comment, one negative comment, and a suggestion for the inventors. Use complete sentences and make sure that your feedback is very specific.
When you have completed your warmup, pull up your project. During critique, I will speak to each of you individually and complete a progress check. Next, get a post-it from me and wait for instruction.
Emilee D
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P- A positive comment i have is i like how it is a tablet test, and not a lot of money.
N- A negative comment i have is what if it doesnt work sometimes?
S- Maybe try to take more tests to identify if you have a concussion.
Erica Lucero
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positive:i like how they can give a test that is accurately right. and it doesn't cost a lot of money.
Negative comment: what will happen if the tests fail. how would you know from there if you do or do not have a concussion.
suggestion: make different tablet tests and not just one because one can fail, and if one fails then you have a back up plan.
Zalina W.
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Positive:It is a good idea , and an amazing invention.
Negative:it may take in the wrong information in and the test will be inaccurate.
Suggestion:Make sure to keep upgrading it so the test shouldn't ever inaccurate.
Mariah G.
ReplyDeleteP- This invention is a lot easier than going to a hospital. It's also on a tablet, so you won't have to pay a lot of money to go to a hospital.
N- How do you for sure that it works? What if it messes up?
S- You should test this invention on different people, some that have concussions and some that don't.
Lupita A.
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My positive comment for this is that it is not a lot of money.My negative comment is that you don't know for sure if it will even work.My suggestion is that they should take tests over and over to make sure it works for people trying it.
Aubrey C
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p- I think this is a great idea for a sideline concussion check.
n-One question i have are you completely sure that player pretending to be okay they will detect the voice
s- Maybe you should have a chat line with real doctor on it
Ashlin M.
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p- a positive comment would be i think its a very quick and easy way to detect a sign of a concussion
N- a negative comment is i don't think they should necessarily rely on this program. i think no matter what they should get a second opinion just in case it doesn't work.
S- i think they should try TO MAYBE MAKE SURE ITS GOING TO TELL YOU A CORRECT ANSWER so that people don't rely on this system and end up getting in worst conditions.
Dyllan R
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negative: using a ipad to detect concussions, may fail
positive: its easier to find out if they have one.
Ashley M.
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One positive comment is that it's a lot faster and most kids don't want too be pulled from the game even if they are hurt.
A negative comment is the panel might mix up the voices and say a kid has a concussion when they don't.
A suggestion from my opinion would be to maybe update the program every few months, so that way it wouldn't mess up.
Dominique Conley
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The positive is that its easier to find out.
The negative is that it can sometimes not be 100% accurate.
Dannelle K.
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P-I think it is great so you don't have to go to the hospital just to be told you have one or you don't.
N-does it work correctly?
S-Maybe you can have a little facetime thing as well.
Shantel L.
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Negative: Using an iPad to detect any concussion can fail.
Positive: It can be much more easier to carry around the tablet as your taking the test.
Suggestion: Use a computer to be more accurate with the results.
Steven G.
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It tells the people playing the sport if they can continue or not. It may not be affordable for new sports players. Make it easier to afford so people that cant buy a tablet can be checked for concussions.
Anthony J.
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I think That this is a very cool way to detect concussions. I also think that it is kind of nerdy. I believe that the people should make it more affordable.
Elizabeth L.
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One positive:I think this is great idea
One negative:what if the panel malfunctions and says that person doesn't when he/she does
One suggestion:My suggestion is that it could be upgraded to ware it doesn't malfunction